56.“生命在于運動。”“運動興,民族興。”全民運動在中國蔚然興起。假如你是一名初三學生

(三十三) (2020 •婁底市)
56.“生命在于運動。”“運動興,民族興。”全民運動在中國蔚然興起。假如你是一名初三學生,你們學校的英語社團正在舉辦題為“Sports”的征文比賽。請根據以下要點,寫一篇英語短文參賽。
1.要點:

 

2.要求:
(1)文中不能出現真實的校名和姓名等;
(2)語言要通順,表達要正確;
(3)要求包含所有要點提示,為了行文需要,可適當拓展和增加要點;
(4)詞數不少于60個英語單詞,開頭己給出,不計入總詞數。
3.正文:
Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
寫作思路
本題為話題作文,要求以“Sports”為題寫一篇文章。文章用現在時,人稱用第一人稱。
參考范文
Life lies in movement. Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular in China.
As for me, I like taking part in different kinds of sports, like football, basketball, walking, swimming and so on. And I also like to watch sports matches. My favorite sport is swimming. I look like a lovely fish in the swimming pool. I enjoy swimming because it can make me strong and healthy. It can also bring me a lot of happiness.
As we all know sports can keep us healthy, so now we students are encouraged to do sports. Doing sports can make us look good and feel good. And doing sports regularly can even help us sleep better at night.
【名師點評】
例文分三段,首段用于引出話題,點出國內運動變得越來越受歡迎的事實。第二段作者提到了自己參加過的運動以及最喜歡的運動。第三段則提到了做運動對學生的好處,建議學生多做運動。例文思路清晰,敘述流暢,包含題目所給要點,并進行了適當拓展,符合題目要求,是一篇合格的例文。
高分亮點:
短語:as for,take part in,different kinds of,and so on,look like,a lot of,as we all know。
句型:
(1)I enjoy swimming because it can make me strong and healthy.(because引導原因狀語從句、make作使役動詞)
(2)Doing sports can make us look good and feel good.(動名詞短語作主語)

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